Friday, December 31, 2010

"Khwahish"

"aaj phir mann mein ek khayal aya,


ruki thi kuchh waqt ke liye..


saffar mein hu abi, yaad aya,


bas ab udna chahti hun..


is rangeen aasma me khulkar,


in safed sapno se chhooth kar...


dum ghutta hai mera


hasne ko socha hai ab, jee bharkar...


par aaj phir mann mein ek khayal aya,


shayad ud na payungi abhi,


teri kahani ko sath lekar.
.........................................."
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12 comments:

  1. Devesh GoyalDecember 31, 2010 at 2:16 PM

    awesome...kahaan se maara :) ??

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  2. UnknownDecember 31, 2010 at 2:43 PM

    hmmm gud one....u wrote dis????

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  3. PriyamvadaDecember 31, 2010 at 2:52 PM

    Goyal , tujhe sab apne jaise farzi lagte hain
    Thanks Sangita ..... yah i do scrib sometimes

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  4. EduConnectDecember 31, 2010 at 3:15 PM

    nice start...hope to see u regular here ;)
    http://ambershukla.blogspot.com

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  5. PriyamvadaDecember 31, 2010 at 3:29 PM

    thanx ..... even i hope for that :D

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  6. UnknownJanuary 2, 2011 at 12:55 AM

    hei priyam....dint know u r so intellectual....
    u drafted ur imagination so welll...goood start

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  7. UnknownJanuary 2, 2011 at 1:40 AM

    apni kwaisho ko u na samet khin
    khulke iss duniya ke rango ko dekh kahin
    duniyan saadi, par auro ko rageen banna rahi
    khulke wo rang aapke uppar baras rahi
    apni kwaisho ko u na samet kahin .......

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  8. vichitraJanuary 3, 2011 at 1:18 AM

    gud1...
    wel u cn do much better...

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  9. Saurabh SolankiJanuary 3, 2011 at 1:12 PM

    Nice One Dear

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  10. PriyamvadaJanuary 3, 2011 at 11:46 PM

    Thanks all :), hope to see your genuine feedback time to time here

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  11. TanuJanuary 4, 2011 at 5:47 PM

    You wrote lovely lines dear :)

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  12. PriyamvadaMay 2, 2011 at 11:04 AM

    thanks tanu :)

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